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Un-Loved Posted on: February 10, 2008, at 09:36:02am As she walks in the pouring rain, The world she knew darkens. All the hope she had is gone, Her heart has been shattered and will never heal. She has lost everything she ever loved. Now a thousand tears fall down her face, But no one is there to see or care. The pain that caused her so much grief doesn't hurt no more. The people who hurt her and brought her down are long gone. She finds a place she only knows, She lies down on the wet cold ground. Her sadness, hate and emotions are gone at last. As the moon shines her thought non stop rain and endless night, The rain falls harder as I walk by. I came to see her there, Her body is bruised and broken. Her eyes are still open and her skin is cold as ice. I can only imagine the pain she had and hope she is in a better place. By me ♥ |
Posted at 9:44am on February 10th, 2008
Haha really sweet poem.
Posted at 10:08am on February 10th, 2008
yes it is.. its sad but i love it..
Posted at 11:01am on February 10th, 2008
You should it is a masterpeice done by you, and no one else.
Posted at 11:02am on February 10th, 2008
thanks hahah
Posted at 9:04pm on February 10th, 2008
Touching. I thought it was interesting how you consistently used commas throughout the poem until the end - it left me quite breathless when I finished reading...
Just polish over some minor blemishes and it will turn out very nice!
Posted at 7:12am on February 11th, 2008
ok thanks..
Posted at 10:37pm on February 11th, 2008
wow i like this poem!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted at 11:45pm on February 14th, 2008
thanks one of my many best friends
Posted at 11:34am on February 18th, 2008
That is a really good poem. Is it in any specific format?
:)
Posted at 1:40pm on February 18th, 2008
no its not it just came to my head adn i wrote it down.. and i love it
Posted at 2:04pm on February 23rd, 2008
very nice!!!
the best poems ppl usually love the most that r made by them are usually the ones that come randomly thro their head
Posted at 12:29pm on February 25th, 2008
I like it
Posted at 10:55pm on February 25th, 2008
i love it
its deep im not good at that kind of thing but i try come check mine out =)
Posted at 11:22pm on February 25th, 2008
OH WHATEVER!! your crazy ok truce we bolt
win (although yours is waaaaaaayyyy better)lol
Posted at 12:55am on February 26th, 2008
thanks derie your so nice to me =D
Posted at 2:52pm on February 26th, 2008
wow....im mesmerized!=O
Posted at 1:01pm on February 29th, 2008
I want to help her to..., cam I?
Posted at 10:31pm on March 1st, 2008
nice poem :D very deep btw
Posted at 8:53pm on March 4th, 2008
it is sad i can partially relate to it(i liked it):)
Posted at 9:33am on March 5th, 2008
THATS GOOD!!!
ill have to post some of mine ^^
Posted at 1:30am on March 8th, 2008
Thanks everyone
Posted at 8:53pm on March 9th, 2008
that was very good! i enjoyed reading that. its really touching.
Posted at 8:05pm on March 10th, 2008
awesome poem
Posted at 3:30pm on March 13th, 2008
Aww ;__;!
So sad!
Posted at 7:32pm on March 14th, 2008
Amazing!
Posted at 10:01pm on March 21st, 2008
thats sad, sweet, and so on
Posted at 9:57pm on March 24th, 2008
thanks everyone :D i want to put another one up but i have writers block :S
Posted at 4:10pm on June 3rd, 2008
keep on, keep on! BOO YAH!!! You have an awesome way with words! FINALLY! SOMEONE WHO DOES!!! ok, srry bout that, its really super good! C-ya!
Posted at 2:01am on July 2nd, 2008
I really cried on this poem great job
Posted at 9:15pm on July 7th, 2008
wow.... thats really deep, im sorry about that pain, its really good
Posted at 1:08am on August 15th, 2008
this is some beautiful stuff...i swear ur writing amazes me..so well written and extraordinary..great poem.^-^
Posted at 5:42pm on August 15th, 2008
thanks pal ^^