The River that never flows
Posted on: March 30, 2011, at 12:54:32pm

When summer come's, the wind will blow
but still never will, this river flow
Its form so pure, but still as night
It remains motionless, no matter how hard the fight!

It's hard to see if its there or not
except for when the rain will drop,
though ripples show, water rose
the stream will not over flow!

This river's called pain, it is inside
The walls surrounding it is Hate
But even though, I can't denied
I slow drown in this fate!

And now I know whats going on
but what am I to do!
I want to live a life re-drawn
I life to life with you! <3

1. 1: Kienamaru
   Posted at 3:04pm on March 30th, 2011

   This is pretty good. It has a sort of in and out of flow pattern to it. A bit of rewording might do it justice.