Poem of the heart
Posted on: March 29, 2011, at 02:16:33pm

Her heart was like a Ruby
A bold flame inside lit up
Her eyes of a Sapphire
a pool of limitless potential

Her hair is like thin Topaz
a stream of golden hope
Her Body is that of a Diamond
It's crystal purity show's

Her body is of all these Jewels
for she is that of a Queen
and only to those who are fools
to see her is only a Dream

But one man unlike any other
knows just who she is
everything he can't live without
He's other half she is!

She was Created just for him,
and He just for her
Never will he Lust again,
For their love for each other truly burns!

1. 1: C-Kun
   Posted at 2:27pm on March 29th, 2011

   Tell me what you think! :D
2. 2: sonicsp33d
   Posted at 11:02am on March 30th, 2011

   I like it. You should check out my friend, Kienamaru. he has great poetry up on his page. (If you're interested.)
3. 3: Kienamaru
   Posted at 3:08pm on March 30th, 2011

   Wow... I didn't know you knew sp33d. Heh, same here though. I like it a lot, but the last line is somewhat out of flow. It is acceptable since it's the ending line however. Perhaps you could extend this someday and include Amethyst, Emerald, Opal, Onyx, and Pearl?
4. 4: lime-lemon-orange
   Posted at 8:07pm on March 31st, 2011

   Damn, I wish I could write poetry like this.
   It's so good! :)