==Loneliness Embrace==
Posted on: August 8, 2008, at 11:34:26pm

I guess love and lust correspond to one another,
as to life and death who love each other,
as to memories and broken ones flee away to the neverland,
and with loneliness and regret holding each of my hands.
Creep oh so softly so i won't hear the truth,
tell the world that you never needed a girl like her,
treat life as if she were never there,
kick her to the dust with
her tail between her legs.

Her loneliness tells all as she gives up hope,
that she'll never find that special someone to live with her and cope,
so lost and confused this girl should be,
as to her heart is the only thing she wants to bury.

One life left alone,
one born in a home,
lonesome girl sit so alone,
with no daddy to hold,
no one to care for her,
sweet teenage girl wanting love desperately but im so sorry you won't get it my love.

Giving up is what's best for your heart my dove,
regretting the past only adds stress to you love,
so sit and relax and wait for the right one to come,
just relax your mind and just be who you are.

1. 1: Harp of Altara
   Posted at 2:30pm on August 11th, 2008

   Nice and emotion-filled. I like the little touches you add every now and then ("oh so softly" in line 5).
   The rhythm seems a bit off in some of the latter stanzas, though. I'm still jealous of your poetry ability!