XxGotta GivexX {poem}
Posted on: August 4, 2008, at 11:32:24pm

Give me the reason to say no
or look into my eyes and tell me yes.
Give me the permission to say what's on my mind of how you are,
your troubles,
your foolish actions.

Give me the reason to say no to the proposal,
give me the courage to say no to the mind that was a disposal,
to why now my heart is left totaled,
over controled of your reasonings.
Of all the reasoning in the world, give me the reason to tell you no.

1. 1: Harp of Altara
   Posted at 2:17pm on August 11th, 2008

   Nice effort. It's a lot better than I can write, in any regard.
   The rhyme in the second stanza is a little contrived, though, and I think "controlled" (line 9) has two "l"s.