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Okay so i know i have a lot of poems and song but please if u will go to the second page and check out all of them, to tell me if there good, okay kinda critique me because ive written a lot more since then (too lazy to post them today) and i'd like them all to be at least satisfactory.

THANKS!
XOXO
~Rae

screaming
yelling
begging
they all scream out ym name
and im useless
my legs unmoving
in the blood-stained snow
a bloody blanket over the ground
they yell for help
then everything goes bacl
my body falls to the ground
then
as i wake
the screaming is gone
the opera of peoples last screams
my now crimson red hair sticks to my frigid body
and the sickeningly sweet satisfaction of killing
killing those trying to kill me from the inside out
i open my eyes
a grin plastered on my face
then i remember
it was merley a dream
a horrible nightmare

sorry
im so sorry
sorry
oh so sorry
the only thing running through my head is sorry
on the floor of rejection
and wasted directions they took her life
if only i could have
(instrumental)
so sorry
if only i would have answered her calls
she wasnt crying wolf this time
i lie here looking at my blood-stained hands wondering what it is i could have done
she lie here dead(goes down)
cold in my arms
the last thing i heard was help!(long)
on thge floor of rejection
and wasted directions (back: or should i say never used at all)
they took her life
as my face grows hot (back: tears)
her body grows cold(back: death)
ill do whatever i can
do whatever you want
just please dont die!
(repeat beggining)
(whisper)
i brush her hair our of her face
seeing her now clouded eyes
i bite my lip
reminding myself not to cry