my book so far
Posted on: February 19, 2009, at 08:32:45pm

zme was in a hurry to finish her daily chores around the castle. She was in the process of dusting the Prince’s room when the door suddenly burst opened causing Ezme to drop her duster. Expecting the cause of this absurd noise to be another maid she swiftly turned around to yell at the culprit. To her surprise it was not another maid but the Prince himself.
“Please forgive me Prince Scott. I was not aware of how late it was.” Ezme quickly tucked her dark brown hair behind her ears. “I shall finish early tomorrow your heiness, good-day.”
She turned to pick up the duster when a hand gently grasped her shoulder. The hand pulled her back straight and then reached for the duster. Before the prince could see she made her ragged uniform more presentable.
“Allow me,” The Prince picked up the duster and handed it to her. “I should be the one apologizing. I do hope you forgive for startling you like that.”
Ezme stood there looking startled. For years she had been under the impression that royals were selfish and unkind to everyone especially the maids. Looking at the prince she saw that it was not only untrue but completely off base.
“No, really, I should have finished long ago I apologize for not having your room finished, good-day your highness.” She turned again this time to leave.
Catching her off guard again the prince spoke. “Do call me Scott,” he offered her his hand. “What is your name?”
Warily she shook his hand. “Ezme your hei… Scott, “she corrected herself before the prince could protest.
“Ezme,” he repeated “Are you new to the staff? I do not believe I’ve seen you before.” The prince was scrutinizing her face, her strong cheek bones, olive skin, dark brown hair, hazel eyes, and her beautiful smile. There was no doubt in his mind that she was from a servant family.
“Yes, I was hired while you were away.”
“Well, welcome to the most boring castle in the world. I’m sure you’ve been having fun cleaning it. I hope your room is to your liking. Have you been through the grounds yet?” He finished as Ezme laughed.
“No, as you can see I am a bit behind in my chores


any ideas of stuff after this part would be greatly appreciated

1. 1: star reaper
   Posted at 9:33pm on February 19th, 2009

   i have an idea why don't you have a plot where the prince try to kill his father and have the prince be 3rd in line for the throne so that makes him have to kill of all the others to and the servant girl ezme should by accident find out about the hole plan but when she goes and try's to warn the king she gets stopped by the prince and then sentenced to death for some strange reason but she ends up escaping and fleeing as well and the rest could be how she gets back in and warns the king of his assassination