Uruka Cu-etsue
Posted on: August 1, 2007, at 09:26:50pm

Uruka Cu-etsue was born 1655 at Tashibi's hospital. Uruka's parents, Hudshi and E-utsue we're both killed in the shujushi church after haveing her been baptised, The church collapsed. Noone knew why. Befor Uruka was born, her parents had made plans for her, as almost if they had known they were going to die, so they left an adoption paper for Uruka to be adopted when they died. Noone had wanted to take her because of the curse on her family. But someone did end up takeing her in... Her uncle Ketshu. An evil man he is, Uruka hated him. He would abuse her, kick her, Make her do family studies in her small room for to long. When then Uruka thought, Her parents wouldnt have let this happen if they were still alive, so thats when uruka went in search in the family book room for her parents papers from the past befor she was born. She found nothing but her uncles books. Its like her house was erased. The next day when Uruka woke up she saw a board on the floor moved a bit. So she moved it. To her surprise it was a tume. And her parents were barried down their. She was shocked, She ran back up to her room in tears. Their she saw her uncle grinning at her with a necklace of some sort in his hand. She had looked at it as it beggined to glow. Her uncle left the room though. She said in encouragement "I need to get that necklace!" She started to fall asleep though as if she felt so dizzy. Then she saw a figure by her window and she fell to the floor knocked out. When she woke up she was on the floor with glass all over her. She looked at her window and it was smashed. She thought this was the real escape time to get away from her uncle... but she still needed that necklace. Uruka jumped out the window With her fathers guns and walked to her front door and shot the door down and her uncle looked at her with a grin and he let the cristal necklace fall out his hand. In a flash Uruka Headed for the necklace and grabed it and jumped behind her uncle and choked him to death. When he stoped breatheing she droped him to the floor and threw a blue stone on him and ran away. The next day Uruka woke up in some mans room. He walked in the room and looked at her and smiled. Uruka had cuts and ropes that tied her to the bed. The man said " My my Uruka what have you got yourself into now little girl". He leaned over and kissed Uruka, But befor he could Uruka slit his throat and took out two griffons and headed for the window, While running to the window she shot the window and broke it and jumped out. Uruka hadnt noticed that the ocean was right behind the house and she fell in the water and sank to the bottom. After 9 hours the necklace crystal had melted in her eye some how. Uruka had Awaken With Dark black and red eyes. She swam to the top in 2 seconds with great speed and anger. Uruka let out a jiant scream and it made huge waves everywhere. She jumped out the water and blood was driping from her back. Then white wings had shot out of her back with blood stains all over them. Uruka flew away into the night moon. When Then Uruka saw something in her way. A 15 yr old boy was floating right befor her very eyes. Uruka flew closer to the boy, and held him in her arms as he was still knocked out by something. Uruka flew away with the boy and to her eyes she saw a cave near by. She Flew faster and faster to the cave. Then she had landed in the cave, Started a fire and lyed the boy on a long rectangular looking rock. Uruka started to fall asleep. The next day the boy woke Uruka up. He poked Uruka and said " Miss, miss are you alive?". Uruka opend her eyes and looked at the boy. The boy stared at her cut on her neck that was deep but not deep enough to kill her. The boy said " Hi miss im Sukibi Tashibi, Whats your name?". Uruka looked at him wide eyed and mumbled "Tashibi?" Then Uruka said " My Name is Uruka Cu-etsue". Sukibi looked at her, smiled and said "Im 15 years old, How old are you Uruka?"
Uruka answerd "13 Sukibi".

1. 1: Thats_Me_123
   Posted at 1:09pm on August 2nd, 2007

   oh come on and finish it plz
2. 2: MMShadow
   Posted at 5:59pm on August 4th, 2007

   Its turning out really well, though there are some tiny things that could be fixed, Diffrent wording, diffrent words to make it seem a little more diverse and a little less jumpy =/ it seems like she is here, and then there and there and then there
   other than that its just small fixes to make it flow but it seems really good! good luck with this christy! have as much fun writing it as i do reading it ^______^